My paper project

What I could have done better on the paper that I wrote about, is the put together and the way I could have worded my paper and the things that I could have done with the paper. Some other things that I wished that I picked up on when writing then paper is what I need to do exactly and how it needs to be done the right way. I am still trying to fix my paper to better my grade for the class. Some other stuff that I could have tidied up on in the paper that I wrote was the way I was saying stuff and how I worded it. Over all I feel that I did an okay job with the paper that I wrote, and the movie that I had to watch for my paper was great and I really did enjoy all of it.